This story is a suprizing change of pace from you normal humor. The artwork and color are very good, and the story is very interesting and compelling. Good job so far.
Cattservant, apt commentary as always. Fireydeath, I'm certainly glad to have the approval of Fiery Death. KFP, good to know that problem is solved. Doug, this is indeed almost totally different than what I've been doing, and I'm glad it appeals to fans of the goofier stuff.
You know, it just occurred to me; as fallen as the Narrator considers himself to be, he still has people who care enough about him to bring his manuscript what must be a very long way to his parents.
As if!